Looks fairly solid, but I would definitely get Maze of Ith in there with the Urborg u are running (planar chaos one). Gives you a versatile defense to your otherwise kill-my-stuff-myself thing.
I tend to run more ramp than you, from signets, Mind Stone, Gilded Lotus, Worn Powerstone, etc. the new worldwake ones still need to find decks, now that I think of it...
You could definitely support another fat creature or two, especially if you increase the ramp. What is your goal, though? wanting to just abuse Lyzolda as much as possible? Boris Devilboon could give B/R tokens to eat. Otherwise im not sure what you are looking for.
EDIT: Phyrexian Reclamation would be great here, means you have limitless (with mana/lifegain) recursion!
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Lyzolda, the Blood Witch
Creatures: (17)
Goblin Marshal
Fleshbag Marauder
Skirk Prospector
Moggcatcher
Malfegor
Siege-Gang Commander
Mindslicer
Puppeteer Clique
Murderous Redcap
Hostility
Boggart Mob
Goblin Sharpshooter
Flametongue Kavu
Squee, Goblin Nabob
Pit Keeper
Hell's Caretaker
Highway Robber
Enchants: (7)
Goblin Assault
Breeding Pit
Grave Pact
Necropotence
Oath of Ghouls
Tortured Existence
Darkest Hour
Artifacts: (8)
Lifeline
Deathrender
Sol Ring
Teferi's Puzzle Box
Anvil of Bogardan
Ivory Tower
Rakdos Signet
Skullclamp
Spells: (14)
Empty the Warrens
Dragon Fodder
Diabolic Tutor
Makeshift Mannequin
Revive the Fallen
Innocent Blood
Plague Wind
Recover
Terror
Terminate
Smother
Barter in Blood
Decree of Pain
Do or Die
Lands: (37)
Volrath's Stronghold
Lake of the Dead
Urborg, Tomb of Yawgmoth
Urborg Volcano
Dragonskull Summit
Akoum Refuge
Lavaclaw Reaches
15 Mountain
15 Swamp
I'm not sure what else should go in any ideas?
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Rakdos Riteknife would be cool for flavor.
I tend to run more ramp than you, from signets, Mind Stone, Gilded Lotus, Worn Powerstone, etc. the new worldwake ones still need to find decks, now that I think of it...
You could definitely support another fat creature or two, especially if you increase the ramp. What is your goal, though? wanting to just abuse Lyzolda as much as possible? Boris Devilboon could give B/R tokens to eat. Otherwise im not sure what you are looking for.
EDIT: Phyrexian Reclamation would be great here, means you have limitless (with mana/lifegain) recursion!
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