Mmkay, this is my first time posting here, and this is only my second EDH deck. I'm pretty new at Magic, too, so any advice and pointers would be appreciated!
You have no way to search your library for a specific card and no way to draw extra cards. This is going to lead to a deck that performs erraticaly and will get overwhelmed late game.
You are going to want to go heavier on the artifacts, to cover for Red's weaknesses as a color.
Magnus Magicus: Thanks! I didn't know how to link the cards, and another user, Myr, told me how. I'm still new to these tags, haha.
Shinriko: Thank you for the advice, I'll definitely look into it. Red wasn't my first color choice, but a Red-White Martial Command deck is a little beyond me at the moment. I'm pretty new at making decks, but Myr's been showing me how and hooking me up with rather awesome cards so I'm good.
I recommend adding the card draw in place of some of the 1for1's. Replace lava axe with crystal ball and Khamal's desire with a tower of fortunes. Try and get a sensei's divining top if you can...since they really help. Also...the token generation will work really well for you since each token gets your generals bonus! This deck makes me want to build my own version!
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You are going to want to go heavier on the artifacts, to cover for Red's weaknesses as a color.
I suggest you look at the red cards and the artifacts from this thread: http://forums.mtgsalvation.com/showthread.php?t=161090
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Shinriko: Thank you for the advice, I'll definitely look into it. Red wasn't my first color choice, but a Red-White Martial Command deck is a little beyond me at the moment. I'm pretty new at making decks, but Myr's been showing me how and hooking me up with rather awesome cards so I'm good.