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Not really a stand-out piece, the usual lighthearted fare from Blippy. Kind of ironic that our pieces have similar names, since I wrote my first draft maybe an hour before this poem went up.
Nice work. A love poem...that I can actually tolerate! It's nothing on the level of Byron's late work, but it conveyed it's message clearly. Did the stanzas just come out in similar forms, or was it intentional? Either way, it helps add to the sense of cold repetition one feels, for lack of a less cliche expression, at the intersection of Love and Heartache.
I actually like "Where's Waldo," and would've voted for it. Shame you didn't keep it! New piece feels kind of emotionless, telling the story of...what, shambling to the bathroom, drunk?
Feels a bit so-so. Dunno I guess. Maybe try mixing it up with your poetry, write some less personal stuff for a change. It loses it's edge when we're reading a prosaic journal.
I voted for Kpaca's piece. It was extremely creepy and obviously about the sick ****s that put razor blades in holloween candy.
never the less, upbeat and oddly enjoyable.
Where's Waldo needed to be editted, so I through Gin in off the cuff.
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These are the submissions we have received this week.
A Found Poem on the Back of a Postcard in a Pizza Joint by Urbanus
Two ships by Sam111111
Of Kings and Whores by BlippyTheSlug
3AM by skyheartchaos
Of Mice and Men by Zelderex
Gin by Yanni
"Drawing my last breath..." by tezzeret12
The Selfless by kpaca
Weakness by Madding
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A Found Poem on the Back of a Postcard in a Pizza Joint by Urbanus
That was...weird. I still don't know how I feel about it.
Two ships by Sam111111
I felt like the poem drifted a bit, so I'm not sure exactly what it's about, or supposed to convey. Something about a girl, and your poetry?
Of Kings and Whores by BlippyTheSlug
Not really a stand-out piece, the usual lighthearted fare from Blippy. Kind of ironic that our pieces have similar names, since I wrote my first draft maybe an hour before this poem went up.
3AM by skyheartchaos
Nice work. A love poem...that I can actually tolerate! It's nothing on the level of Byron's late work, but it conveyed it's message clearly. Did the stanzas just come out in similar forms, or was it intentional? Either way, it helps add to the sense of cold repetition one feels, for lack of a less cliche expression, at the intersection of Love and Heartache.
Gin by Yanni
I actually like "Where's Waldo," and would've voted for it. Shame you didn't keep it! New piece feels kind of emotionless, telling the story of...what, shambling to the bathroom, drunk?
"Drawing my last breath..." by tezzeret12
Feels a bit so-so. Dunno I guess. Maybe try mixing it up with your poetry, write some less personal stuff for a change. It loses it's edge when we're reading a prosaic journal.
The Selfless by kpaca
I dunno if I should take that as a weird non-sequitor, or an extremely out-there allegory for drug dealing.
Weakness by Madding
I liked more than a few lines, but it felt like I was reading the same couple lines over and over.
Votes going to Skyheartchaos, and Madding (though I was on the fence about that one).
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never the less, upbeat and oddly enjoyable.
Where's Waldo needed to be editted, so I through Gin in off the cuff.
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