My initial thought is simple: Too many weenies for a general that fat. Take out some of the weenies that don't do much and replace them with the types of cards you're wanting to add, probably on the lower end of the curve; so you don't get destroyed or pull player aggro while you're getting set up.
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EDH:
:symb::symb::symb: The Horde! :symb::symb::symb: Vish Kal, Blood Arbiter Dralnu- Dimir Snap!
:symwu::symur::symrw: Zedruu the Greathearted :symrw::symur::symwu:
:symwu::symub::symwb: Zur the Enchanter :symwb::symub::symwu:
Kumano, Master Yamabushi
Thalia, Guardian of Thraben
1x Garza Zol, Plague Queen
His Lackeys (25)
1x Kalastria Highborn
1x Vampire Nighthawk
1x Drana, Kalastria Bloodchief
1x Soul Collector
1x Captivating Vampire
1x Bloodlord of Vaasgoth
1x Malakir Bloodwitch
1x Gatekeeper of Malakir
1x Chancellor of the Dross
1x Bloodcrazed Neonate
1x Vein Drinker
1x Vampire Hexmage
1x Olivia Voldaren
1x Baron Sengir
1x Falkenrath Mauraders
1x Moroii
1x Stromkirk Noble
1x Anowon, the Ruin Sage
1x Ascendant Evincar
1x Sangromancer
1x Bloodghast
1x Bloodline Keeper
1x Vampire Nocturnus
1x Blood Tyrant
1x Vampire Interloper
1x Evil Twin
1x Sakashima the Impostor
1x Clone
1x Kira, Great Glass Spinner
Planeswalkers (1)
1x Liliana Vess
Sorceries (9)
1x Sign in Blood
1x Living Death
1x Cruel Ultimatum
1x Black Sun's Zenith
1x Patriarch's Bidding
1x Profane Command
1x Diabolic Tutor
1x Beseech the Queen
1x Blood Tribute
Enchantments (4)
1x Bad Moon
1x Curse of Stalked Prey
1x Curse of the Pierced Heart
1x Phyrexian Arena
1x Gravitational Shift
Artifacts (14)
1x Contagion Engine
1x Crystal Ball (In place of Sensei's Top)
1x Journeyer's Kite
1x Talisman of Dominance
1x Rakdos Signet
1x Dimir Signet
1x Izzet Signet
1x Coalition Relic
1x Akroma's Memorial
1x Wayfarer's Bauble
1x Sol Ring
1x Darksteel Ingot
1x Spine of Ish Sah
1x Loxodon Warhammer
1x Crosis's Charm
1x Grixis Charm
1x Jace's Ingenuity
Lands (37)
1x Vivid Creek
1x Bojuka Bog
1x Urborg, Tomb of Yawgmoth
1x Jwar Isle Refuge
1x Duskmantle, House of Shadow
1x Terramorphic Expanse
1x Crumbling Necropolis
1x Drowned Catacombs
1x Akrom Refuge
1x Dragonskull Summit
1x Evolving Wilds
1x Tolaria West
1x Vivid Craig
1x Tainted Isle
1x Command Tower
3x Islands
6x Mountains
13x Swamps
Theme is: I'm gonna drain you dry.....with my family
Slots Left: 1
What I do not want to put:
Counterspells
Hard - Mass Removal
Expensive Cards (i.e, Vamp Tutors, Dual lands, Fetchlands etc)
What I'm considering to include:
Temple Bell
Rakish Heir (yet to get my hands on one)
Nicol Bolas, Planeswalker (Just for the Grixis Flavor)
Bad Moon
What I'm considering to remove:
Talisman of Dominance (Too much ramp..?)
Skeletal Vampire
Butcher of Malakir
Major Concerns:
High CC overall
Almost zero card draw though I'm playing Blue/Black?
Any more suggestions or critique?
Change Log:
Took Out ---> Slotted In
(13/10/2011)
Skeletal Vampire ---> Bad Moon
Butcher of Malakir ---> Vampire Interloper
Talisman of Dominance ---> Night Dealings
Sengir Vampire ---> Gravitational Shift
Iwamori says "Just Bring It!"
Edric's Spiesssssssss (Snake Tribal) GU
Sliver Overlord (Slivers Galore!!) WUBRG
Ruhan of the Fomori RWU
Seton, Krosan ProtectorG
Intet, The Dreamer (Hive Mind + Scrambleverse anyone?) URG
Karona, False God the Goddess of Tribal - Samurai, P3K Horsemen, 5c MyrsWUBRG
Garza's Family UBR
Sygg, River Guide and his merry merrowmen UB
Sharuum, the Hedgemon Sphinx Tribal
EDH:
:symb::symb::symb: The Horde! :symb::symb::symb:
Vish Kal, Blood Arbiter
Dralnu- Dimir Snap!
:symwu::symur::symrw: Zedruu the Greathearted :symrw::symur::symwu:
:symwu::symub::symwb: Zur the Enchanter :symwb::symub::symwu:
Kumano, Master Yamabushi
Thalia, Guardian of Thraben
Iwamori says "Just Bring It!"
Edric's Spiesssssssss (Snake Tribal) GU
Sliver Overlord (Slivers Galore!!) WUBRG
Ruhan of the Fomori RWU
Seton, Krosan ProtectorG
Intet, The Dreamer (Hive Mind + Scrambleverse anyone?) URG
Karona, False God the Goddess of Tribal - Samurai, P3K Horsemen, 5c MyrsWUBRG
Garza's Family UBR
Sygg, River Guide and his merry merrowmen UB
Sharuum, the Hedgemon Sphinx Tribal